Hi, I’m abi falase.

And I write what I like to call “feel good social realism,” wrapping up big conversations in pockets of humour, romance, fantasy and drama.

My debut novel, Eden Rebellion was published in collaboration with BBC Books, Penguin Random House and Doctor Who! A childhood dream come true. I also write for stage and screen, working with theatres and production companies all over London! As well as being a writer, I’m a director and facilitator. I love to transfer my skills to support artists reach the fullness of their creative potential.

I’m obsessed with new stories. I love finding an artist’s creative voice and channelling it through literature - getting into the nitty gritty of character, world and structure.

If I had to choose another source of fuel outside of food, dramaturgy, story consultancy and writer mentorship would be high on the list. It’s my favourite thing to get nerdy about!

i’m your story sous chef

Do you need support cooking up your new story? Check out my offerings!

  • I’ll read your script and provide comprehensive, constructive feedback designed to elevate your project.

    You’ll Get:

    • A comprehensive report covering Story, Structure, Dialogue, Character, Tone, Genre as well as Prompts and questions to take forward your next draft

    📜  Rates:

    • 5 – 30 pages: £200

    • 30 – 50 pages: £250

    • 50 – 90 pages: £280

    • 90 – 120 pages: £320

    • FREE 30-minute consultancy to discuss your project needs first.

    Optional Add-On: A 1-hour Zoom deep-dive (£30) to discuss notes and next steps.

  • An intensive, long-term partnership for writers of any medium. This is a tailored journey to develop your project and your craft with industry-focused guidance.

    What’s Included:

    • A 6-month, one-to-one creative partnership.

    • 18 hours of total mentor time, flexibly split between detailed script reading/feedback and live meetings (Zoom/Phone/London in-person).

    • Feedback at every stage: from concept and outline to multiple drafts.

    • Tailored career advice and strategy.

    • An initial action plan and ongoing project management.

    • Potential industry connections: Where projects are strong, I will leverage my network to make introductions to producers, developers, or agents (outcome not guaranteed).

    Investment: £2000 (Flexible payment plans available)

    This mentorship is for writers committed to a significant leap forward in their work and career.

  • Every month, a limited opportunity for writers. I offer two sponsored dramaturgy slots per month, up to 90 pages, at a reduced rate.

    Join the waitlist to sign up!

the process

  • Connect

    It all starts with a friendly chat — a complimentary 45 - minute consultation to explore the work ahead. I’ll learn about your hopes, goals, and past experience, and together we outline a path forward that’s realistic, strategic, and tailored to your specific needs.

  • dream

    I’ll read your work twice. First pass: a quick read to get the gist and identify major strengths and pitfalls.

    Second pass: a close, line-by-line read to annotate and evaluate.

    I’ll examine and report on:

    Story - core concept, stakes, pacing, scene progression, thematic clarity.

    Structure — overall arc, chapter/scene order, transitions, beats, setup/payoff.

    Character — motivations, growth, distinctiveness, relationships, consistency.

    Tone — voice, mood, point of view, register, emotional resonance.

    Dialogue — voice differentiation, exposition in speech, rhythm, subtext, realism.

    Genre — fit to conventions, opportunities to subvert, audience expectations.

  • Embody

    It's time for you to rewrite — you’ll receive prompts, questions and resources to take into the next stage of your revisions!

the investment

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Dramaturgy!
from £200.00

Build your script with a seasoned professional. I provide detailed, constructive notes and kitchen-tested techniques to refine your work and support your creative voice.

Flexible Payment Options Available! Just get in touch!

The 6-Month Script Mentorship The 6-Month Script Mentorship
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The 6-Month Script Mentorship
£2,000.00

An intensive, long-term partnership for writers of any medium. This is a tailored journey to develop your project and your craft with industry-focused guidance.

Flexible Payment Options Available: Just Get In Touch!

Get in touch